Nightingale

In the voice of nightingale. :P

Singing up all night,

Now the morning light
slits into the air,
and darkness leaves bare.
Twitched my eyes,
waking up with new hopes.
Raising the sound i could,

Bursting bubbles spaced out,
from my throat.
Horror! I caught a cold!

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

lovely...........
thats what you get for cooing all night......couldn't have left the people in peace......

beautiful and witty...
skillfully crafted....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Jeyanthi]

You don't know to appreciate the lullaby voice. :P

Thanks... :D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

actually i do!!
you are very welcome.........!!! :) :)

[Jeyanthi]

So you are too... :P ;)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

why did you think i was so awesome!!! :) :)

[Jeyanthi]

lol, so does the awesome. :P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

aha........i am a miracle!!! :P :P

[Jeyanthi]

i can truly understand your side effects of reading a fantasy. :P

[alf]

hahahaha. Loved this Jeyanthi!!!! My gosh!! What can you do with a cold??? Turn it into a great poem!!! Loved this, it really made me laugh, alf

[Jeyanthi]

I'm always curious about writing some humor sensed, i think am scoring now. ;)
Thanks for responding to my request Alf.

[alf]

Oh, my friend, you are indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jamestown]

The waking up part to beautiful singing birds really cool, but
to a cold ahhh that's not cool, great write!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah..
its just that no can escape from cold. :P
Thanks for stopping by! You are blessed too ;)