ladylike

Happy Sappy :P

Twirl the dress and dance,
No more stress to trance.
 Laughing whole heartily,
It shines real beauty entirely.

Forgive all beautifully,
Pass it gracefully. 
Walking like tender,
Not mend to surrender.

Know what you might,
And add them quite.
 When reaching the height,
Sing in delight.

Is all signs of weak-like?
 No, but as ladylike.

Author's Note

Just an influence of buying a new dress. :P

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts.
" Forgive all beautifully,
Pass it gracefully.
Walk like tender,
Not mend to surrender."
You took me with you in your thoughts and words. I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks for stopping and saying so...
I'm glad you liking it... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[RiverRei]

That was beautiful. I love how you describe being a lady. So poised and elegant. I like the format and rhyme scheme you used here, too. Very well written. Thanks very much for sharing with me :)

[B]

A truly lady
Knows to always keep others in good standing
no matter what

A lady
Is love

Stunning
Love it my lady :)

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you Nisreenaa... :)

[B]

Always welcome

[Maumil Mehraj]

It just made me happy :) very pleasant poem
Loved it
Maumil

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks for noticing it :)....
I"m too happy for you happiness.. :P

[Rajat malik]

Curiosity to buy new dress.....a nice work

[Jeyanthi]

thanks.... :P

[Rajat malik]

you are welcome :)

[Saddam]

Beautifully write dear friend.
It contains great flow.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you Saddam... :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Nicely written. Its always good reading your poems. Rating 99# oh... Wait, no no... Rating 100#

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks IM.. :)
I'm so happy that you are enjoyed my poem.
I'm treasuring your support. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Always welcome:)

[alf]

Hi Jeyanthi. So very well written!!! two things, to keep the tense correct, walking and reaching (and remove up) then all will be right. really a delightful read. Loved it, alf

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks... I edited, i think my poem could survive now. :):D

[alf]

Cool!!!! That reads beautifully now, alf

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Great FUN!!!!
Awesome......so happy and feel goody.........
could imagine you dancing with that new dress in hand.........and wearing another one!!! i am a gentleman.

beautiful!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Jeyanthi]

lol.... :P

thanks for taking time to read... :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are very welcome.....!!! :) :)

[Jeyanthi]

It's like pothys advertisement now.......