Untouchability- RAVIN' INK PROMPT

RAVIN' INK PROMPT is untouchability which is out of reach(23/11/24).... but I used social thoughts - Jey, India

Under one sky,

all breathe same air,

the blood is red,

food for living,

drinking for thirst,
all cast shadows.

Most of untouchability talk

parades in human

for show and sympathetic stunt,

yearning trust for their show to run,

we believe and become prey,

hoping for any change.

But in real divided by thoughts and

beliefs. Even many turns of page

can’t educate…..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are needed in the USA too dear poet. We have angry leaders wanted to create confusion.
"Under one sky,
all breathe same air,
the blood is red,
food for living,
drinking for thirst,"
The above lines. All of us need. I have written often. We are more the same than different. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Jeyanthi]

Our own understanding can change someone's path, too...
Thank you for sharing your thoughts .. Sir.. 🙏 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

I do tried my friend and you are welcome.

[Amy R]

Your poem highlights the irony of people sharing the same basic needs and humanity while being divided by beliefs and prejudices.
Very realistic read for the night. Thank you for sharing.
-Amy

[Jeyanthi]

Yes dear... thank you for the review...
But I left the line while editing "all cast shadows " ... I will be adding now.. thank you for the words and thoughts it made me recheck what I missed...

Have a great day ahead, Amy... :)

[Amy R]

You're welcome. Have a great day as well. Thanks 🤍

[Vol]

Excellent response, Jeyabthi,
The group rules are to find the new prompt and post your response the following Saturday...
Thanks
Vol

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you, Sir...
I 😅 😅

[Vol]

You are entirely welcome, my dear, entirely welcome I am sure... :-)

[Jeyanthi]

Dear sir 🙏 thank you 😀..
The poem response came out at instance and out of curiosity ... seeing the prompt 🙂...
I will the follow the rules on coming days.. 😅 💯

[Aarti Sriram]

yes dear we are all the same in flesh and blood and our thoughts and circumstances give us each our unique personality. Education can make us aware and give a decent exposure and knowledge. But any positive change in us cannot happen by reading alone. We need to understand the sentiments and change our attitude and develop our thoughts constructively. And you say it right and simply well through your poem Jeyanthi.

[Jeyanthi]

It's hard though....
The exposure of different situation can make someone understand it... :)
Thank you..

[Dave W.]

You would hope we could all be united over the things we have in common, like, people need to wake up, we all need each other, great poem.

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah right...
We need to help whenever we can and whatever we can... yes we need others too, we must be grateful for the work they do which we can't do at all.. :)

[Dave W.]

Jey I hope you have a great day

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah 😀 you too... Great day and work too...