Reflections

A prose poem... Ravin' ink prompt- reflection

The sounds of the seashell

speaking the ocean words.

The letters of cloudy sky

from moon to sun

sharing night and day.

The cry and smiles of baby

literally synonyms

every language.

The struggle inside the seeds

shading everyone it sees

as a tree.

The lovely colors layer

the petals of floral

attracts bees to pollinate.

The stamens and pistle

of the flower together

make tasty berries.

The rise and fall

flow of the river

catches by the ocean.

The nurturing earth

leaves plants trees greens

enhance the livelihood.

The fire and the flame

ignites inspiration

always ready to conquer.

The love of broken heart

sparkling in between

the many pieces.

Author's Note

Just a reflection.... :) but left the rainbow 🌈 for you...
thanks for reading...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I adored the complete poem dear Jeyanthi.
"The struggle inside the seeds
shading everyone it sees
as a tree.
The lovely colors layer
the petals of floral
attracts bees to pollinate."
The above lines were my favorite. I live in Michigan. My garden is resting in December and I am waiting for the days of Spring. We must know dead and we must know life. To appreciate what we have. Thank you dear poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jeyanthi]

I'm so much humbled by your reviews and kindness and words...
Garden is rewarding, when it blooms it gives us joy... here in my place, we have one flower name December flower, violet colour though it blooms throughout the year but on December month it flourish ✨️ 💜..
Thank you sir 🙏

[Coyote Poetry]

I love my garden. Four types of roses and Sunflower plants. You are welcome my friend.

[John the Baptist]

Interesting the way you worked in human emotion at the poem's end. Perhaps it is just as natural as the things mentioned in the preceding lines.

[Jeyanthi]

That's right... 😃

Broken in the process is the reflection.. :)
thank you for your great comment..

[Amy R]

Your poem explores the interconnectedness of nature, emotions, and life experiences, highlighting the beauty and complexities of existence.

The language used is vivid and sensory, using imagery that evokes feelings and visual representation.

Very beautiful poem, love the imagery and flow of it..
Thanks for sharing
-Amy

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you so much , Amy.. 💓

[Amy R]

You're welcome. 🤗

[Gregoria Ahmed]

Jeyanthi, your poem 'Reflections' is beautifully💕💕 woven together with rich imagery and thoughtful metaphors. Each line feels like a meditation on the interconnectedness of life, from the 🌊ocean to the flowers🌹, the seeds🌱 to the river. I especially loved the way you personify nature, making it feel alive and full of meaning. The final lines about the broken heart sparkling in between its pieces were particularly powerful—showing that even in pain, there’s light and resilience. ❤️Thank you for sharing such a reflective and inspiring piece!

[Jeyanthi]

Hi dear sister... thanks for enjoying the poem... :) 😀 it is encouraging...
Broken heart needs mending sometimes nature and time helps to get it healed...
:)

[Gregoria Ahmed]

You're welcome! Your poem is beautiful—nature and time truly have a way of bringing healing. 😊

[Soren]

We are all part of a greater hole just as smaller parts are part of us. We are all united everything is us and we are everything a wonderful poem.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you for your wonderful words and kind comments..
:)