Sleep a dream

Thoughts ...

Every dream is a child,
don't constantly feed
mercilessly with
past regrets sorrows
the flown time
unbearable made decisions
tears and pains
forgotten wishes and wills.
Come out of depression,
Its a pit.
"It's darkness here".
Yes you see darkness,
be thankful for
SEEING.
And that's the way out
from darkness and
sleep to
dream again.

Author's Note

It's already said that the only secret ingredient is "you".. thanks for reading. Always blessings.. Sleep tonight 😴

Reviews

[Marie]

Lovely use of metaphor in this finely penned poem. In order to appreciate the light, we must first experience the darkness. In darkness, the light is still there, we just don't see it. It's like knowing the stars are there during the day, but we can't see them until evening time and darkness envelops the land. Sometimes our dreams are better than our reality, but we can't continue to sleep, we must wake up and get on with our life or it will pass us by in the blink of an eye. Great play with words, dear Jeyanthi. Excellent inking! Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading this insightful and thought provoking poem...

[Jeyanthi]

Dear Marie, that's absolutely right... your way of reading excels in each reviews and interpretation you give... thank you for the kindness and your words of wishes... yes dear, seeing is the sense... blind people sees the world in differs from our world... when My mom appointed to write exam blind school students, their interactions and their views varies with our day today normal life...

[Marie]

Most welcome, dear Jeyanthi. Thank you for your very kind words. Wishing you a very blessed and joyful day, dear friend...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

And the dream will find its purpose just as a child will grow and find his or her way...
from sleep to waking fulfilled.
j.

[Jeyanthi]

Dear Sir...
Yes sir, finding sole purpose is like dreams coming true, sometimes fate intruder but we should abandon that child
...
Thank you for sharing your thoughts 🙏

[Light and ashes]

This is great..
so many good words and thoughts.
Wise.

[Jeyanthi]

Hey there 👋..
Thank you 😀

[Jeyanthi]

Your dp rocket 🚀 😍

[Jeyanthi]

I mean rockzz 😅

[Light and ashes]

Dp? Oh, thanks. I made it, myself.

[Soren]

A hypnotic feel to this one that prefers dreams and sleep to reality. I have been there and know that place.

[Jeyanthi]

Sir, I knew you might be there..... those were the scaresit days.... I prefer sleep as medicine after that, even I'm grateful for having sleep each day...
People who suffer maybe they find find peace one day...

[Soren]

May you find it

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes ... the way out is seeing. That you for this gentle write. I really enjoye dit:)

[Jeyanthi]

Yes dear... thank you for kind words..😀

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Jeyanthi. We need to know darkness to appreciate the light. Wonderful dance of words and thoughts dear poet.
Coyote

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you for kindness and review dear sir 🙏... yes, I light whenever possible ✨️

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.