UNTITLED 1

A Poem by JB Murray

Written for a cool little contest... an advanced ten/forty... ten words... forty lines...

UNTITLED

By: JB Murray © nov 2009

(advanced ten/forty poetry contest)

It dissolves, swiftly

Like forever strangers

The B side of an old 45

Not quite a friend

A roll of the dice

More tears

A separation of will from hope

The ink bleeding from a newspaper

Black fingers

No rhyme

© 2009 JB Murray

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Helen Crutchett

Well I did enjoyed it! Fantastic write.....thanks for
submitting this to Tovli's contest! ~ Helena

Posted 16 Years Ago

Tovli

LOVED this. Excellent! tovli

Posted 16 Years Ago

LeeLee Ryder

GOOD ONE... I love how you connected/compared
forever strangers with the B side of an old 45
a brilliant connection....
I also like:The ink bleeding from a newspaper Black fingers
Kudos
LeeLeesmallworld
(I entered that contest too.. check out Cacciatore Hunter)

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on November 27, 2009

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JB Murray

Orange, MA

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About me huh? Well... I am writer...go figure huh? Lol. I am writer in many ways. First and foremost, I am a singer/songwriter. But I also dabble in poety, essays, one liners, short stories, and .. more..