Addiction

A contest poem... with an intersting first line... so many ways to run with it... I chose the darker side of things...

ADDICTION

By: JB Murray © April 2010

 

Falling down into the darkness

I see nothing

But I remember this place

The smells and sounds

The slow, incestuous ticking of time

The unnerving breath on the back of my neck

I hear the faintest of whispers

An adulterous kaleidoscope

The coppery overtones of skin and flesh

Ah yes…  This is what love tastes like

Reviews

[darkgurl]

This is quite interesting hope you don't mind but I kind of chuckled at the end of this. It's wonderful but i felt the need to laugh at what love taste like. I hope you don't mind me reviewing your stuff. I like what I have read so far.

[Norma M Sutton]

Short and sweet. Interesting write from a single line.

[beautiful disaster]

nice.....you always make me think and feel ur writing

[Political Punk ~~ CBD]

nice job