CHANGES

Attempt at minimalism... enjoy and please comment!

CHANGES

By: JB Murray © August 2010

 

 

Trees

 

Leaves

 

A sparrow’s nest

 

Home

Of little chirps

 

Autumns calling

 

 

Brown

          Red

                   Yellow

                             Amber

                                      Gold

 

 

Falling…

Author's Note

I appreciate all comments and criticism... good or negative... we only grow as artists when we can look at it from both sides and al points of view... enjoy!

Reviews

[beautiful disaster]

I like the way that you wrote this. Word placement not only gives you animation but a visual as well. Good job

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

Minimalism attempt succeeded ... This piece sets up a natural scenerio perfectly and illustrates how seasons change effortlessly and without a big to do ... A gentle flow and beautiful descend of falling leaves .. I like, JB!
GBU