Walk

A poem I wrote "Walk" I wanted to make it 8 lines with each line having 8 syllables.

Walk on the air, despite the winds,

Walk on water, despite the waves,

Walk through the fire, despite the heat,

Walk through hate, despite the haters,

Walk through this life, despite the grief,

Walk the den, despite the lions,

Walk with faith, despite the doubting,

Walk when you fall, just keep walking,

Reviews

[Kelsey Schadt]

I liked the motivation this poem provides. Keeping with your goal, I'd revise this line as it only has seven syllables

Walk through fire, despite the heat


Maybe
Walk through (the) fire, despite the heat

[Matt Hope]

LOL I originally had "walk through(the) fire despite the heat" geuss I missed it when I was posting it up here