She Says

I long for passion...

Two Souls collision

rapidly descending into endless oblivion

 

hearts being guided with perfect precision

together, questioning this very existence

 

a question of fate, or a product of choice?

 

i long to hear the certainty in a voice

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

ohh that was so sweet ,i always said love is the only truth..all love
love is strong and crazy ,when its the call
two people just lose their minds
its perfect in everything ,it knows where its heading
destination is clear ,and the end is for sure
its never fate or choice ,its a fact and certainty
its madness the only truth
lovely write

[An owl on the moon]

This is filled with that hunger for more... more of life, of love... That longing that so often goes unfulfilled as people settle into the banality of their world. Thought provoking write, to be sure.

[GioVonnie]

Nice Job,

"hearts being guided with perfect precision
together, questioning this very existence"

These two lines really make the poem stand out to me.

[alan khan]

the first two lines espcially, were really nice. and the wording in this whole thing was great. nice work.