Restless

short and sweet, a little idea of how i've been feeling lately

The restlessness sets in, and the skin begins to hum

Tantalizing inspiration, it desires to be undone...

Reviews

[Horizons]

A powerful piece of emotions, inspirations, sets of words and a piece of desire of peace. I liked this brilliant piece which's filled with feelings and sweetness's. Well done!

[Tony]

Striking contrasts!
Incredible sound imagery with the "skin begins to hum" line.
The effects of our emotions on our body reverberates with inspiration here.

[.]

god-i can understand this-the inspirational tease of a creative mendacious voice.

[Anicca]

Brilliant two line poem. Thanks for sharing!

[Forever Mine]

I prefer shorter poetry and this definetly caught my attention. Good job, i enjoyed it

[.]

{what wistful image of what we all feel sometimes...
"when restlessness sets in"---causing us to fancy
pretty much anything to get rid of that tense emotion
even though we don't really know what it is we want}

...great write...

james:-)

[An owl on the moon]

This is so emotionally stirring, giving us that sense of those moments of inspiration that rise and grip one so poignantly.. Vivid and alive.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

here brevity works beautifully~ opens the sensate imagination like a little box of gems just waiting to be explored~

[Quaddeth]

I definately prefer shorter poetry and prose as seen in my own work, this is definately a good piece. Thanks

[Dream Weaver]

Sometimes less is more and this
is a perfect example, Nicely done
Jillian...