Suicide Sound Good to Me.

I wrote this because a girl i went out with for 6 years cheated on me in September. I Just wanna see how people like my poems.

My love towards you is forever, but i cannot say the same for you. You fucked up my life forever when i did nothing to you. Now you say your sorry but my life will never be the same. You fucked up my heart b***h so I will not believe in you. I would rather die than live like this. Suicide sounds good to me.

You think that I will do anything you say but you are wrong about everything. You ruined your trust by cheating on me. Suicide sounds good to me.

If I would have seen what you really were I would have never asked you out. No matter what I do I cannot stop loving you. You will always be a part of me even when I do not want you. Suicide sounds good to me b***h, what about you?

Reviews

[Brokenshards]

Powerful poem especially the last sentence. It differs structurally from your average poem but manages to maintain a sense of rhythm which is rare. It's sad but sometimes the biggest betrayals of trust can lead to the best poems. I'm sorry that that happened to you. I hope you will see that you are better off with someone who deserves you even if you might not be able to see it right away.

[PokemonFan#1]

A very sad poem...

Your feelling's back then [maybe even now] were hurt by her. I'm sorry.

It was a very good poem.

KEEP IT UP!

[karen samarin]

nobody is worth dieing over.... if she was the right 1 she wouldn't of did that . love is precious don't give up on it or on yourself...this poem is very emotional. thank you for sharing this with me

[No name]

this is a really good poem, filled with your emotion and thoughts. nice write

[Jane Doe]

Life's a beach were just playing in the sand(:
Life's a b!tch then you get over it
I like this poem
It's raw emotion like madea movies
They start out sad
Get worse
But in the end it's the happiest the purest emotion
Only god can help us through everything when you feel this way and think of me
For no matter what by your side I'll be

Xoxo
~a
100/100

[Secret Lullaby]

wow i know how u feel..... this poem is really good

[_Hanabi_]

i agree with the previous comment....i can also relate to this.... sometimes i feel the exact same way....great piece of write...keep it up.
Natty

[Lillianna Rey]

wow....i can totally relate to this. ive felt this way so many times....amazing write