Falling upon rocks

A Poem by jinjahman

senryu slayers - wotd: sanguine

Falling upon rocks,

the liquid so lively drops.

Boy grins; bloody knee!

© 2010 jinjahman

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Kerry O'Connor

I love the musical cadence of the second line.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Wondering Mind

blood-red knees from fall
cheerfully confident smiles
sanguine they will be

Posted 15 Years Ago

leave it to a boy
to be proud of a scraped knee
he'll peel the scab off

Posted 15 Years Ago

Angel Bird

Great senryu!
With your two first lines you develop a scenario of horror, and only then one finds out the simple truth. Truly well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on October 19, 2010
Last Updated on October 19, 2010

Author

jinjahman

Ireland

About

I've written songs and poems since basic maturity emerged from youth. I'm driven by reminiscence and reflection, youthful endeavours and changing realities of life. I try to explore the lexicon of th.. more..