Dead Calm Pall

Dead Calm Pall

A Poem by jinjahman
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For senryu slayers WOTD: adumbrate [a-duhm-breyt]: to produce a faint image or resemblance of; to outline or sketch; to foreshadow; prefigure; to darken or conceal partially; overshadow

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Veil drawn down on Eve.

Mourning beads held translucent;

Dawn of dead calm pall.

© 2010 jinjahman


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Morbid. I like it.

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very gloomy, indeed.

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 Added on October 28, 2010
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jinjahman
jinjahman

Ireland



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I've written songs and poems since basic maturity emerged from youth. I'm driven by reminiscence and reflection, youthful endeavours and changing realities of life. I try to explore the lexicon of th.. more..