Whose Apple?

~You and I.

* * Who I See:

the doe-eyed and the much missed

the trailer and the plastic couch

the fork the road enlists

the fit freak and the potato slouch

~The I with the You, seen anew.

* * Who You Hear:

The majority and the push

The cast and The One

Adrenaline and the rush

Slurpy soup and a bun

Pirate chemistry in reverie

Crumbling walls around a dying tree

~The You and the I, hear a cry.

* * Who We Feel:

My God and your God's child

The sun's blast and the moon's hug

A hazel bush and garlic wild

The wooden bench and the pattern rug..

Where we sit and chew 

on The Apple, to its core.

Reviews

[Lilly Negoi]

utterly impressed am i by this poem! the structure is exquisite and the wording wonderful! the conclusion is just the candy on the cake!