Distrust

Distrust

A Poem by JJ Escobar
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poem of an experience of being distrusted

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What did I do deserve this?
I know I'm not perfect, but why can't you trust me
Everything I did was to maintain your trust in me
I sacrificed desires to prove that your trust wasn't amiss

Now I feel like you really have been using me
Your hurting me and causing resentment to unfold 
My anger wants me to hate thee
I better trust in God before it's too late and my heart grows cold

I thought we were better than this 
I thought our faith had taught us better than this 
I feel like you have been using me now 
I was the wild but silent ox yoked to the plow 

I hoped my behavior has shown I could be entrusted 
Now I have seen my effort only led to my heart getting busted

© 2019 JJ Escobar


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“shown I could be entrusted/only led to my heart getting busted”

Back at it with the ending couplet wordplay!

Enjoyed the vulnerability of you showcasing your frustration in this one!

Great job Bro!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on December 10, 2019
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JJ Escobar
JJ Escobar

Pearland, TX



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New to writing and wanting to express my creativity. more..