the best of the worst

told to write my worst,

well this is a first

this is the 3rd line

in a long line of surprises

"that's life," surprise surprise,

i could never be great

in your eyes.

yet i still try,

o i try SO hard.

dosnt it make you want to cry?

Reviews

this might actually be the worst poem here... Hope for the best, or prepare $1,000

[Sarah]

Very original piece. It's short, yet holds a lot of emotion. I liked the use of dialogue & the question at the end. Well written. (: