Track

I wrote this about the most traumatic breakup of my life, and no it is not about my ex wife but my ex mistress

She turned her back

Knocked me off my track

Why did she have to go?

I love you babe, don't you know?

Without you I cannot deal

My scars will not heal

I need you here with me

How can I make you see?

That you and I a perfect pair

With the world I want to share

The Love I have for you

Never doubt that it is true

But for now she walks away

Loneliness my price to pay

Now I hope and pray

One day she returns to stay

Reviews

[Dylan]

Good meter and distributed rhyme. Not over the top emotionally. Short phrases seem to work for you.