The Comparison

A Poem by Jay

This is about the woman that I love and how she is a dream to me

The Comparison
A comparison?
No way
She is nothing
My heart breaks
Everytime you walk away
Could it be?
Are you the one?
The one from my dreams?
Yes.

So much more beautiful.
In person
Eyes shine like the stars

Every nook
Every cranny
Pure perfection

Never expected you
My life now fullfilled.

© 2009 Jay

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Added on February 8, 2009

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Jay

Holly, MI

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I am a 22 year old poet. I love writing. Its my best friend that actually told me that I should put my poetry online and I figured I would try it. SO here it goes!!! more..