...So Over You...

I was so tired of being afraid

Yet words we’re still inside unsaid

I held back, but I still did

I love you goodbye is what I bid

I was so tired of those times

When you’d leave my side, EVERYTIME

When you’d forget to say I love you

For you’ve forgotten me, didn’t you?

I was so over of those feelings

When my heart would kept pounding

But you’ll let me down, you’ve lied

While tears sat beside my sight

And I am simply so over you

‘Cause I know things won’t work out too

I am over you, but still couldn’t let go

Yet I’ll seek what’s behind my tomorrow..

Reviews

[Kyle Sky]

Very beautiful in verse and strong in nature. Also the words truly presented the mood clearly. A broken heart's first words should always be I'm over you. Great piece.

[Irvette Dauphine]

this is great poem..
this poem just flowing, no need to read it..
like this :D

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And I am simply so over you

‘Cause I know things won’t work out too

I am over you, but still couldn’t let go

Yet I’ll seek what’s behind my tomorrow..
Well said! 100/100 =)

[Hotaru]

thank u :DD

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you're welcome

[Miiki]

I can relate to this poem, except I didn't date the guy I like. But other than that, i know how it feels.

[Rhianne Ney]

don't you... i guess can be changed to 'didn't you' because it's already done... it's okay if you mean don't you anyway .. Good poem about a broken heart. Thumbs up stay strong (:

[Hotaru]

haha... thanks for the review! :DD

[Rhianne Ney]

haha also