Woebegone

She stared at the sunset sadly

On a terrace she watched carefully

Reminiscing the past painfully

Remembering, but trying to set free

Over again she bowed her head sorrowfully

While her tears fell slowly 

Author's Note

this is my second poem... :DD
and i wrote this because it describes my feeling.... a lot... uhmmm... pls. ignore the wrong grammars.. LOL... thanks ",

Reviews

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Amazing & beautiful, that's all I gotta say ^_^
100/100

[Irvette Dauphine]

this is amazing.. like this :)

[kublakhan27]

This is awesome for only your second poem :)

[Serena]

Love it :)

[felli]

this really shows your emotions very well. great job!

[Steven Cash]

Ooooooh, nice! I like it!

[Hotaru]

thank you.. :))

[Allyson Wolfe]

These aren't often successful, but this poem definitely is! Although you have limitation with this style of writing, you overcame it. Nice write.

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Touching poem!
Hope you get better from those feelings. :)
100/100