Moonlight

moonlight dances soft 
silver across rain puddles 
made me think of you

Reviews

[Emily B]

oh, I've had so many conversations about moonlight

and several with you

this is somehow one of the tallest poems I've met lately

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. beautiful ... gentle ... sublime ... "silver across rain puddles" is sheer magic and profundity ...

[Robin]

simply wonderful

[What happened to simple..]

'silver across rain puddles
made me think of you'

I can't describe a sweeter lost romance & an incredible comparison, the moon causes us to wonder, stare in awe, smile. Love.

It's unlike others of yours I've read. This one really caught me, but then I'm all for those quotes that make me feel whole inside.