PLEASE

The very first poem I ever wrote.

If one can say

The best word everyday,

It's fun, it's love, it's peace,

If one starts with a "please".

Say "please" with a smile,

You're favored all the while.

Say "please" with love,

You're blessed by God above.

Reviews

[S]

I remember a friend of mine who always add 'please' in everything she says. I used to be annoyed. Now I'm doing it, too :)S

[aacpuente]

That's so good to hear! :)

[pinkcookie]

It's simple and lovely. Nowadays people take everything for granted and this is a nice reminder of how it actually should be.

[aacpuente]

Thank you pinkcookie! I really appreciate your review

[Pax]

short, sweet and wonderful... blended together for us to read the moral of this piece. well expressed, kabayan.

[aacpuente]

Thank you Pax!