Repeated Thoughts

A Poem by Dorian

You're wearing his sweatshirt

You went to his concert

Did you go to that park with him?

He holds your hands, he holds your waist.

He knows the taste of the corner of your lips

Did he see the wave when your hair got wet?

You get two spoons for one ice cream.

Your hair is in his bed.

Did he see you in that blue dress?

You are with him

to eternity

© 2025 Dorian

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Buddhistboy73

Repeated thoughts.....an interesting write...:)

This sounds like someone that has been wronged and can't get the person out of their head....you can feel the emotion of the words here....

I liked the line about the two spoons for one ice cream...and then the refrain .."you are with him"

Thanks for sharing....

BB73

Posted 7 Months Ago

Kady R.

Hiiiii!!! I'm sorry for what you're going through (if this is about you). Thanks for sharing. This poem is so honest in it purity. That yes we can become jealous, and there's nothing wrong with that, and it's that's a form of going through the motions of reality. Wonderful perspective

Posted 7 Months Ago

7 Months Ago

Jealousy is a very strong emotion. Thank you for reading!

Lorry

Ah, the seeing another with who was once yours is never a pretty sight. It shows that only one has moved on, which means one has been left behind with not so much as an afterthought.
Perhaps one day the one that replaced will be replaced themselves, or the one that hurt will be hurt themselves.
Sometimes we can't help but think I'll for those that hurrt us so thoughtlessly.

Posted 8 Months Ago

7 Months Ago

Sorry for the late reply. You are right. Thank you for your comment.

7 Months Ago

No worries.

Kelly Scheppers

Angst and lost love make for some of the best poetry. A very emotive piece, Dorian.

Posted 9 Months Ago

7 Months Ago

Sorry for the late reply. Thanks for your comment.

Thomas W Case

Wow. You capture the pain and anxiety well.

Posted 9 Months Ago

9 Months Ago

Thank you.

Chris

IF, and I do mean IF, this one is personal - pause and catch a breath. If it is not personal - damn, ya done good - cause it really has the afters-taste of personal.