Naturally

Passionate kisses 

Sweet smiles 

Lingering touch 

Breath taking eyes 

Everything coming together

naturally 

catching my breath 

Don't 

Don't 

slow this down 

Keep it going 

 

Let it flow 

naturally 

allow it to take your breath

away 

Don't 

Don't 

Slow this down

Keep it going 

Passionate kisses 

Sweet smiles 

Lingering touch 

Breath taking eyes 

Let this love last

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy. If there is anything that you feel that I need to improve on please let me know

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Passionate kisses
Sweet smiles
Lingering touch
Breath taking eyes

Let this love last"

[Sami Khalil]

I'm lingering in the beauty of this write...Bravo.............

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and this is lovely. So soft, sweet and filled with passion. I would take the mature rating off though - It doesn't cross the line as far as I can tell. Your poem is beautiful.

:) Julie

[dw817]

Can't see why this is rated mature, but that's fine. It's certainly romantic and passionate, a credit to your writing ability, Fluttershy. :)

[Ruth]

Sublime...stall the moment and grow within it :) x

[Hatchling]

Thanks darling

[Ghost of Jupiter]

nice piece on the rush of feelings and emotions that can flow over you in those heart bursting moments. Loved this ... great work. I will be back for more...

[Hatchling]

Thanks :D :D

[Chloe]

Cute. I can almost imagine this playing on the radio, but it won't, of course, be one of those songs. You know what songs I'm talking about. Kudos to you.

[Hatchling]

Thanks. Yeah I got ya. :P