Changed

Changed

A Poem by Hatchling

I thought I knew the notes 
to the song, then out of the blue 
you changed it all. 

The dream I knew began 
changing into a nightmare 

I wanted out but you pulled
Me back in. 
Wandering through mazes 
hoping to find a way out. 

Not knowing where to turn, 
a little bird showed me the 
way out 

I'm now finally free out 
of the nightmare's clutches 

© 2015 Hatchling


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MCS
I really get this
Glad you're out

Posted 10 Years Ago


And I am glad that you are free from the nightmare's clutches! May you find one who is more deserving of YOU. ~Sharon

Posted 10 Years Ago


A playful, yet deep tone to this piece. Rather nice to hang out with.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Did you mean "wandering through mazes..." Not "wondering." I really quite enjoyed this. It's not always fun when people change things on you after you've known them for so long.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hatchling

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review.
A gorgeous write. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.....:).....

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hatchling

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome. ....).......

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