The light that went missing: Chapter 1

This is the introduction to a short story I'm going to write..

Since birth, she was dealt a world of cruelty and confusion.  Locked up in chains was her heart, tainted with pain and haunting memories.  She was destined to a life with no purpose and no reason to belong.  A misfit; a child left cold in the dark.  Every light she touched would soon blacken into an abyss of horror.  She was alone and felt her only reason for being was for others to feed off of her weakness.  Hungry for love and starving for affection, she never knew the right words to say, just so she could fit in.  Everytime her heart skipped a beat, it destroyed her even more.  Holding on by just a thread, she traded her last beat for something unimaginable.  

Author's Note

Will be continuing to add each chapter slowly. Hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Traci]

Excellent introduction. Can't wait to read more!

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

That's quite an intro! OK, wondering what comes next. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good introduction so far. Gave the reader reason and create thoughts by the good description. You have a storyline. Now need a story. Thank you for sharing your story.
Coyote

[Jolie Blossom]

Thank you, you always leave such insightful comments. I wasn't sure about this, but I am definitely going to continue with it atleast as a short story. :)

[RaspberryBullets]

Oooh, READ REQUEST ME WHEN THERE'S MORE! I love it, love it, lovee itt! You've got me hook, line and sinker. xox

[Jolie Blossom]

Ok! For sure! GlAD You like it!

[Bluefire]

I so can't wait!

[Jolie Blossom]

Aww, thanks bluefire, ill add more soooon

[Bluefire]

Yay :)

[Stanley Wilson]

looking forward to it gripped already

[Jolie Blossom]

wow really? well ill be writing more to it and upload it soon, hope you enjoy!