Waiting

on days you're not here my world stands still

Roses may be Red,

And Violets Blue,

But none of that matters,

When I'm not with you.

With matters of the heart,

I am unable to start,

Without you in my eyes,

The failed attempts,

And numerous tries.

Distance is my trial,

Whether it be an inch or a mile,

I yearn for your touch,

It need not be much.

I must get past this lonely time,

For once again you shall be mine,

As I have for you

Roses of Red,

And violets dark Blue.

No more waiting,

For me or for you.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was adorable. I loved reading it because it was just so adorable. You have a natural talent brother...keep it up. Thanks for sharing...

[That_Guy]

I'm a big softy

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Okies

[Alexa Tasch]

This is so sweet! Heart break is painful, but inspires some of the best writing! Keep it up!

[That_Guy]

Thank you :)

[Alexa Tasch]

You're welcome!

[Faffy]

Excuse my language but this is f*****g amazing for your first poem well done you were at least 1000x better than me when I started!

Well don't great read :)

-roshan

[That_Guy]

haha no worries Mate. Thank you man I appreciate it

[Faffy]

DONE**** i hate my phone

[That_Guy]

haha I knew what you meant. I deal with auto correct all day. Ask That_Girl

[That_Girl]

No, you just say wildly inappropriate things and blame them on auto correct XD haha

[Faffy]

HAHAHA

[Faffy]

been there done that bro =P

[That_Guy]

Auto Correct is more inappropriate than I am, don't listen to her Roshan

[That_Girl]

*rolls eyes* Roshan knows how his world revolves... he'll listen to me. XD

[Faffy]

hahaha my world revolves around xbox school poetry and food i dont see avy in there =P

[That_Girl]

She hides. XD

[Faffy]

hahaha

[That_Guy]

She is sneaky

[Angie Diane♥♥]

...She is very sneaky, but she's in my bed ;)

[Faffy]

haha.. wait whut? =P

[That_Guy]

So that's where she hides...

[Angie Diane♥♥]

We sleep together to cuddle every night Jon...we have a very incestuous relationship haha. xD

[That_Girl]

Ohhh yes. ANGIE! You weren't supposed to tell him! Now he'll want in on our action! smh

[Angie Diane♥♥]

He's not allowed in my room...he pins me to much >.> sister control your hubby.

[That_Girl]

Yes'm. He's now chained to my bed.... I'll wear him out and then come over. He'll be asleep. ;)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Lol good. ;) I can't wait for you too!

[That_Guy]

my energy just jumped 10 fold

[That_Girl]

I have stamina baby. ;)

[That_Guy]

I'll be putting that to the test

[That_Girl]

Can't wait. ;)

[That_Girl]

Awwww this is adorable! The words would make for the most epic wedding vows. It's beautiful, Jon. Truly.

[That_Guy]

My first poem... haha Thank you Avy, that means a lot coming from you.

[That_Girl]

:x not a problem

[Broken Wings]

I love this

[That_Guy]

it was the first poem I ever wrote

[Broken Wings]

Well it was beautiful ^_^

[That_Guy]

haha thank you

[Priscilla Sayers]

POsitively wonderful and whimsical:)

[That_Guy]

haha thank you ;)

[justthatgirl34]

I absolutely adore this poem. Very well written.

[That_Guy]

Thank you very much :)

[Pi Cee]

Beautiful. Some people'd give anything to feel like that.

[That_Guy]

I haven't read this one in a while... it was the first poem I wrote. Thank you

[That_Guy]

I appreciate your reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

It was a dream filled pleasure. I cannot begin to fully describe its beauty but it was grand.

[Angelic Surrender]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!