Secret Champion

love is blind, especially when she doesn't know how you feel

My love for you gives me power,

I stand tall when others would cower,

Overcome, achieve, never settle for less,

I'll prove to you I am the best.

You're all that I see,

I know where I want to be,

With you by my side,

I hold my head up with pride.

No one else can give,

My reason to live,

The way you shine,

I must make you mine.

The best prize to be had,

This trophy I must add,

My hearts beats for you,

Yet you haven't a clue...

Reviews

[smurfett]

Very pretty.

[That_Guy]

haha thank you

[Destinyxi]

This is really cute. I haven't felt love in awhile. This poem makes me want to feel it again. Great job!

[That_Guy]

aww thanks. I'm glad, you should ;)

[Tasha]

This is so romantic, you really do have a way with words. :)

[That_Guy]

Thank you so much. I like I'm a pretty romantic guy ;)

[Tasha]

You're welcome. I can tell, its really nice a lot of guys are afraid to admit it :)

[That_Guy]

fortunately I can back it up by being a martial artist ;) haha

[Tasha]

haha that's nice too ;)

[That_Girl]

"With you by side," By my side?

You have a way with words. Lovely piece of your heart. It's great hun. :)

[That_Guy]

yup thank you.

aww you're too kind ;)

[That_Girl]

No problem.

Completely serious. This is really nice. :)

[That_Guy]

thank you, this was a very real poem for me

[Pi Cee]

You're love poems are amazing.

[That_Guy]

I'm a hopeless romantic heh

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is very romantic..... :O)

[S. Michael Long]

I like this a lot, it reads well, it's not cliche like many poems of this genre can be. It's great work!

[Demi Rose]

totally awesome poem