What Time is Good for You

As it passes us by lets take advantage of it

They say it heals all wounds and flies when you’re having fun,

Then why does it seem to drag on every time I go for a run.

I’m being told it’s running out,

So what’s this killing it all about?

Time is of the essence and cannot quit,

Now get up and  lets make the most of it.

A night out on the town,

Or just a day in the sun,

Don’t rush your choice nor pick just one.

Time only matters when I’m with you,

And never hurts more than I’m used to.

It need not be every waking moment,

But in my life you’re the main component.

Let this be the beginning and not the end,

For that wound time cannot mend.

And if it would help I’d make it stand still,

 So I’m sure Father Time would make do,

Now tell me, what time is good for you?

Reviews

[Beautiful Brat]

Such talent and a way with words. Definitely adore your writing when it gives such great emotion and feel. Each word holds a piece of soul.

[Kaylor Mason]

Wonderful! As I read this I was struck by beauty, love, and it made me laugh (which is rare). Anyone having a bad day should read this to cure it: this is an uplifting poem if there ever was one :)

[Diane]

I could do tomorrow is that good?? ;)

[Yellow Butterfly]

It truly is important to make time for the one(s) we love. Your words are very profound in this delightful write.

Beautifully penned....

[Marie]

This is good. I love how you took a single thought and wove it into your poem instead of just rambling without any point.

[SlipKnoT]

naww that is soo adorable babe xx

[Perfect Mistake]

awesome poem. I liked it. keep up the good work

[Angelic Surrender]

This is great :) good job.

[Southern Angel]

Awesome write :)