water at the bottom of the ocean

Inspired by the band The Talking Heads, the artist David Byrne, and the song Once in a Lifetime

 

Box-suit maniac.

 

I do indeed ask myself

 

just as your song says.

 

 

I do find myself

 

in all the manners you state.

 

same, same, same, same, same.

 

Reviews

[DavidRyan]

I love the Talking Heads. I love "Once In A Lifetime". I think we could sit down and talk about art and history and have the same taste for the most part. Your poems are getting shorter, and more to the point -- almost even stronger, if you will. They bring you in, end abruptly and leave you wanting more. Very well done.

[Julio Angel Ortiz]

Short, sweet, and kind of surreal (to me). Not my cup of tea, to be honest... a little too sparse, then again that's a personal preference and not a reflection on you. I felt like we were starting to go somewhere, delve into the depths as it were... and then it stops. Then again, like I said, that's just me. ;-)