darkness

Basically its about when the person you love changes and you can't do anything to help them.

Darkness fell upon the face of my beloved.
The fear crept on like a spider,
Crawling unto it's web
Oh how

Oh how was I to know
You cried, not with sound
Oh so how could I have known

Know that thy beautiful
Darkness crawled it's way unto you,
And made it's nest within your realms.
Your eyes said it all,
You always seemed to be near and yet,
So far

Oh how was I to know

Author's Note

P.S. I have only started writing, I really appreciate all the reviews to help me become a better writer. Thank you

Reviews

[Eleanor]

I read few of your poems and I think you have a lot of talent. You put all your feelings into your work. You just need practice :) Girl, you have potential.
I like this one. How much we want to help someone we love, after we know what they were going through. But it gets too late. We just sit and hope. That's what we can do. Only hope, to help him/her.
Great try! Thank you.

[jo]

Thank you very much for the positive review will definitely practice a lot. Thank you
Jo.