Existence

Walking over this bridge

Im looking down at the ridge

To notice a deer in the distance

It looks in the water at it's existence

To be alive and able to breath

It enjoys running through the leaves

I can now see what that beautiful deer achieves

I will never again think these creatures are naive

Author's Note

what do you think of my poem?

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is a wonder and beauty that takes us all into that moment.. And I hope we can all contemplate life so much more than we do.. the bigger picture. Excellent.

[Joseph Aldridge]

thanks very much!

[twinkleshine]

I love this poem so much I'm writing it down in a notebook to read over and over again. Thanks for sharing your work!

[Joseph Aldridge]

Thanks and your very welcome!