stare

07/2012

we have already burned

through the nothing

we thought we knew

another day, another way

perhaps I would have followed

but today I will rally

I will give into strength 

the demons that hunt me

have tasted bitter light

having only been in my way

now they run from me

the tables have turned

savor the misery

drowning in self reflection

has opened a passage for me

let this seep inside your demented bones

let knowledge slowly drag you back home

I know..

that this is the only way to get through

so stare, stare till your eyes burn out

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is powerful... I feel the strength that you have conveyed in this piece. In a sense it was dark, yet there was light.~

"the demons that hunt me
have tasted bitter light
having only been in my way
now they run from me
the tables have turned
savor the misery"~ Excellent write!

[Kaylor Mason]

I saw the photo--what anime is that from?

[joshua deathdealer]

D man grey. my bad

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was powerful and amazing as normal brother. I always love to read your writing. I loved the flow and it was just great. Thanks for sharing :3

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Wow!

[Hayley]

Love the closing. Very powerful, very inspiring!

[Draven]

And so in the midst of struggle and strife, light bleeds through the darkness.

[Jetta Zippora]

Wow. Beautifully done. A tantalizing darkness that intrigued me from the start. I really liked this. Great write, friend.

[Muse]

A dark masterpiece!

let this seep inside your demented bones
let knowledge slowly drag you back home

I keep waiting for the rain....

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Powerful is a understatement you always hit then outta the park amigo.
But this write is a great work indeed.
Im always a fan of your darker writes for to me your one of the best at darker writes .

Very very good read cheers Gonzo

[To be scene To be heard..]

a very powerful piece

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

This is indeed very powerful!!!!! Very beautiful as well, for I've always found dark beauty stronger than light, unless your speaking religiously, thats a whole nother story. Anyway, Great Job!!