rook trumps pawn

09/2013

reaching out

my heart stops

impalpable to you

I fall behind

intangible, I let the wind

take me away

a geriatric tune brings

memories I don't remember 

the lives blend again

the greatest lesson 

in life is this 

we are molded to fit

Reviews

[Muse]

ooooh molded to fit?! I love it when a poem ends with a punch. Interesting subject matter too. If we are no more than a deck of cards...well no matter how the cards fall, each and every card is necessary to play the game of life. Perhaps that's why on Fridays I feel worn out from playing 52 pick-up!

[joshua deathdealer]

Thank you!! I like your take on it.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

beautiful writing. i will keep up with your work more now that im back on here again.

[joshua deathdealer]

I been gone awhile to. thank you.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

but i have come back with more writings and that makes me very happy. i took a break because i had writers block for so long

[FlatLineBeauty]

I loved it. You def hit the nail on the head with the ending.

[joshua deathdealer]

Thank you.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was an awesome piece. I enjoyed the emotions within it. You are still the amazing writer that I knew you to be! Never lose you're talent because you are gonna make it! You deserve to be published. I enjoyed this piece greatly. Loved it, brother! Thanks for sharing!