wified

06/2013

I can't keep it within the lines

I can't make it okay

migraines replace wisdom 

and I am unable to focus 

through the electromagnetism 

that is carefully placed

over my opening eye

returned to the physical world

I am slapped with the uncertainty 

of this disengaged dimension 

I miss my dad

he was right

blinded, I am lead by the lost

in alliance with the damned 

we go from one fountain of lies

to the next

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

blinded, I am lead by the lost
in alliance with the damned
we go from one fountain of lies
to the next

God... That is a s****y combination dude. :)

But who has not been there at some point? Lucky for them. Or unlucky to be so 'perfect'.
Love your style. It's honest, authentic...

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I enjoyed the read and the flow. When I first read it a while ago I didn't know how to respond. I do now. Thank you for the share!

[V. P. Trujillo]

This is a very nice poem, the message being conveyed through fluid rhymes certainly makes good on its poetic nature.