magnetic

A Poem by joshua deathdealer

03/2013

The reins of what remains of my sanity

Has slipped from my hands

The elements are off

Up is left, right is down

Magnetic thoughts pull the worm to

The back of my head

No longer am I chasing mere memories

I have stepped through the boundaries

To dance with the

Congregation of the dead

© 2014 joshua deathdealer

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JessyJacob

this is how you threaten people, what your horoscope is saying living for 100yrs..

Posted 1 Year Ago

You are so attracted to it, like a magnet, again you have written this with a passion only you can... a future death, described with little words, but in a grand way, for "some" it will be scary. ;)

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sharonlee

Riveting effect... suits the sharpness of the poetics

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matching Socks

Nicely done Josh!
Great visual, fitting.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks. Glad you liked it. (:

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Added on July 2, 2014
Last Updated on July 2, 2014

Author

joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL

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"My trepidation of things past is not a song with a beginning, middle and end. But an endless symphony playing infinite variations on the same theme. One day of sadness fades into another and the .. more..