starlit

08/2011

                                    It's so hard to tear myself

                                      out of your tantalizing 

                                         hold, away from

                                      your soothing touch

                                     and take the long

                                     walk back to where

                                   I live which isn't home 

                                     my home is with you

                                   inside your pleasant

                                     gaze, forever locked

                                   into mine, stare at me

                                     my glorious lover

                                  so I can remember your

                                     elegant face and 

                                     your starlit eyes

                                      as I return to

                                       this nightmare

                                         without you

Author's Note

thanks to ivizarx for an edit help on this one..xx

Reviews

[Droll Prole]

Although always dark there is also a shining light of hope in your poems.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

aww joshua this is beautifully said.. always wanting to be in ones arms, to be close to the one you love..

[Amila Jay]

take the long walk back....heart touching!!!!

[writing mojo]

very nice heart felt flow, for the dealer of death....

[Desmund Tiny]

aw.... so sweet........

"I can remember your
elegant face and
your starlit eyes
as I return to
this nightmare
without you"

I can relate to this lines.... I adore this very much..... I can feel the strong emotions in these line..... thanks for the RR..... ^^,

[ivizarx]

Definitely an awesome write bro, I tend to attempt a lil bit of romantic poetry, but your somewhat subtle dark imagery paints a well respectable monologue for whoever this is for. Certainly better I say than any romance poems I've written so far. I would recommend editing one thing, but it really isn't necessary, if you wish me to state it I'll message you (sorry, I have to ask before I give constructive criticism for now on)... But truly, this poem is absolutely amazing ;) great work

[Kenneth The Poet]

Wow, love the twist at the end.