the anticipated return

08/2011

Another night spent in your arms

once again kissing your delicate lips

to rejuvenating our feeble spirits

quickly setting the stage for the 

anticipated return to my hearts home

It's been hell, struggling forward to meet you

but every painful step, every estranged

night, I would do a million times over

to be wrapped up in your tender caress

to stand beside you now and feel the same

breeze that graces the lengths of your hair 

You have suffered so much in my 

absence...I know baby, I've missed you too

being without you is impossible to bear

and yes...I will stay this time until the 

very fabric of eternity begins to tear

Reviews

[Desmund Tiny]

"It's been hell, struggling forward to meet you
but every painful step, every estranged
night..I would do a million times over
to be wrapped up in your tender caress
to stand beside you and feel the same
breeze that graces the lengths of your hair "

I love this stanza.........

I adore this sweet and lovely poem.....


hmmm... the picture.... anime..... nice ^^,

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Soooo Lovely! You words are comforting and would convince anyone of your true heart, to stay...
The anticipation of your return sweetens the bittersweet memories...
Well penned, Joshua!~xoxo~:)

[Sarah]

realy nice it is sweet and powerful nice work

[THE Super Hero]

very nice! Its sweet and has feelings that people can can relate to. I like your use of words, but, I'm not too big on romance so I find it a tad cheesy. Otherwise I enjoyed it!

[roarke]

why blue? I get Synesthesia, I get blue as in depression, but expression in words should create their own colors, their own spectral rainbows and prismatic aurora's.
I think you've done that here before the introduction to color. You may know this already and coloring the words has a personal meaning to you and that's cool. But as a reader, I'm not getting it. And in an artistic sense, I don't have to as long as it means something to you. Not all readers get everything. And that realization also lends to the composition of any creation.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Powerful, sensual poem. Awesome.

[MickeyM]

more love like this should be expressed in real life. sweet poem:)

[Hayley]

Gotta love a classic love poem :) All those sleepless nights and lonely days are always paid off and not paid attention to with the return of a loved one.. Good write!

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that was like reading a personal love letter..beautiful

[Shep]

Another amazing poem I believe. I have found my rival. Lol

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Another night spent in your arms, It's been hell, struggling forward to meet you. Feel the same
breeze that graces the lengths of your hair, I will stay this time until the very fabric of eternity begins to tear.......awesomely beautiful!