the wilted

10/2011

                                     

                                        sadness sweeps my senses, 

                                          leaves shrivel and fall

                                         on the soft breezes,

                                         whispering in my mind.

                                         "save us"  Gaia cries... 

 

Author's Note

written for the "To Touch The Earth" contest. Twenty word prompt from PoppySilver.

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

Nice, melodramatic Gaia, is about time we listened to the world-soul.

[Inyourshadow]

Save us indeed for we have squandered the gifts she gave us, we are not worthy unless we stop raping the resources and start putting something back, Lovely, keep em' coming

Lovely piece. You capture it all within the purity of less... awesome!

[Ed Hart]

yes, you say it well

[Lily Mae]

Very intense... I'm sure she hears your whispers.xx

[EMMIE]

SHORT SWEET AND POWERFUL! SO MEANINGFUL.

[Judas Hammer]

powerful......vivid, nice piece

[Dahlia Phoenix]

So simple but yet intriguing.

[Crow]

I think this piece is brilliant in its simplicity.

Perhaps someday mankind will heed to the cries of the earth goddess.

[Audrey Howitt]

Beautiful write with a sense of stillness before the cry--well done!