the wilted

the wilted

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
"

10/2011

"
                                     
                                        sadness sweeps my senses, 
                                          leaves shrivel and fall
                                         on the soft breezes,
                                         whispering in my mind.
                                         "save us"  Gaia cries... 

 

© 2011 joshua deathdealer


Author's Note

joshua deathdealer
written for the "To Touch The Earth" contest. Twenty word prompt from PoppySilver.

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Well it is interesting.. not just simple.. but delicate? Very well done, beautiful write.

~ rae

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soft words that expresses beauty!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

save us, beautifully written

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blooming brilliant! lol
Really like this one hon...everything about it :)
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

^_^ fellow competition... thy rival is poised with great material I see

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on October 6, 2011
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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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"My trepidation of things past is not a song with a beginning, middle and end. But an endless symphony playing infinite variations on the same theme. One day of sadness fades into another and the .. more..