Life

Lies, deception, hatered

Incomplete, useless

Feelings of being lost, hopeless

Emptiness, sorrow, unwanted

Author's Note

I know it's short, I was venting.
what do you think?

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A handful of vented feelings, into nicely chosen words. Nice.

[Kesav Easwaran]

Nice perception on life, Joshua...nice write...imaginative

[Serena Tan]

Your poem expresses its meaning (and your feeling) clearly.
Yes, man. Life is full of lies, deception, and hatred.
We can feel that our lives are incomplete as our desire is never ending.

[turning violet]

Sometimes, when we say the least, as long as we speak from our heart and say what we believe is to be true, we speak the most.

[Kaylor Mason]

Now that's real venting! I don't think I've ever read one person's feelings summed up so well. You can feel the anger coming right off the words in this piece (that means its well-written)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Sometimes we just have to vent.

[Roxi L]

All of them true

[Sarah]

nice work.