Nothing

All I'm going through

havng to put up with people

and all the things they do

also falling into darkness

with nothing to hold on to

that means no escape

what is my life turning into

hatered everywhere

nothing I can do

 

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Couple misspellings but I'll ignore them, this poem titled "Nothing" certainly is something.
Seems like a lot of thoughts into one piece, yet it doesn't have much detail of those thoughts, it does speak a lot about them. Nice one.

[DearSweetAgony]

Very well written, a couple of grammar mistakes but its not that big of a problem.
I enjoyed reading, great job!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Sad it is that hatred exists. One by one, we can choose to walk the other way, nice work Joshua.

[Day Dreamer]

I agree deeply. Keep writing! :)

[Sarah]

nice work

[HeIsWe]

I like it, and I know there's a bunch of people who could relate to you.

[Que]

I really liked this piece, it is very profound and about something that very many can relate to.
There are some spelling mistakes: "having" (though I guess you just forgot the i there), "onto" not "on to" (not in this case), and then "hatred" not "hatered".
Don't want to be picky, just helping. :)
Cheers and have a good day.

[donny ingraham]

This is a great piece, it is full of emotion and speaks from the soul