Heavy blues

Left confused

alone and blue

is this the best you can do?

I will be your friend

what do i get in the end

we shouldn't expect

but its really hard when its nothing

closing your uber to pick me up and drop me off and leave me again

its all you have to give

or is it a nugget tangling me to the life you live

its so sad this is what reality makes you think

is there no one to trust

no one to give true love

some people can't spend that much time apart

yet you are always so far

blue rain is hitting me hard

please God guide us through the dark.

I heard the news about Coco Lee

she was like a far away sister I listened and looked up to you

wanted to be as pretty i straightened my hair

i sang the songs learned the moves

 life is not fair its tragic poetry

i found a boy to love but its the same ending he doesnt love me back

he wants to give me rides wants me in his life

doesnt see how he cuts me like a knife

i wish to hate so it would truly separate

everytime i succumb to this doomed fate

is he all that i have

its hard to be truly alone on the path

yet even with him this is what i feel

this is cupid making me stupid giving me this real deal

even when fake causing so much heartache

is it the after math of the news

is it aunt flow causing this heaviness of blues

is it really just the nearness of you

do i just ignore you for the rest of my life

has karma come to demand her price

its a sad end i thought we would be somewhere different

it must be the aftermath of the news causing the heaviness of blues

Reviews

[grace]

Your poem is very moving and heartfelt. Your use of vivid imagery and powerful metaphors really helps to convey the depth of your emotions. I appreciate your honesty and vulnerability in sharing your personal struggles with love and loneliness. Your poem is a powerful reminder of the importance of self-reflection and self-care. Keep writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

I had bad karmhas karma come to demand her price
"its a sad end i thought we would be somewhere different
it must be the aftermath of the news causing the heaviness of bluesa for 10 years dear butterfly. I became nicer."
The above. So real, so true and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote