Love Transcends Time

you made me feel
our love would never end
you are still mine
even though it dont feel like it
our love transcends time
i just cant let us die
but there is nothing to do
i can’t breathe
i miss you
but stupid cupid has no love in his eyes
still he is mine
our love transcends time

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Thank for sharing this emotional poem on love and the passage of time.....

I love the depth of feeling here....the sense of not being able to breathe.....the longing of missing someone..I can relate....

BB73

[butterfly]

thanks for the review!

[Buddhistboy73]

You're welcome...

Feel free to stop by and review one of mine...

BB73

[Neha agrawal]

The repetition of “our love transcends time” gives it a timeless, aching rhythm. “Stupid Cupid has no love in his eyes” is such a raw, relatable line.amazing work

[butterfly]

Thanks for the review!