Whiskey Fly

Tiny little bug falls in my whiskey

struggles and swims around

he’ll probably get pretty messed up

before he drowns

I don’t bother to fish him out,

screw it, drink him down;

Unlike the world, nothing

in this goddamn whiskey

can hurt me.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Dark humor in this one. Indeed, that fly will probably get messed up before he sinks. Don't think I would drink the sucker, though. Consider where his feet may have been.

[JR]

Oh I drank him LOL! I like the tension behind the idea of whiskey being safe, compared to the world. That's what I was shooting for... and dark humor for sure. Thanks John!