Marginal error

A poem

The bottom line of every view

the main idea misconstrued

every error I have ever made

could fill a book or play.

 

But I am only a human

and now I can see

creating comes from the heart

not from someone you want to be.

So choose your path wisely,

and each day what you want to see.

Reviews

[Fae]

I really like this. It's quite simple, but the rhythm is perfect in the first verse. I feel like the the second verse is really good too, but I dislike the last two lines, maybe it has something to do with 'see' being used too frequently.

[john]

Yeah that was a marginal error.