Is it dying?

poem/song

Seeing your visions of things never to come
is that what you want?

Make your choices even through only
lonely things will dot them wrong.

Dream those dreams, dream them well
because they are visions of use to Be's.

To realize that you cannot say goodbye,
and do no wrong.

Give me a reason caught up in
your garden of earthly delights.
eat me whole,
like the devil on the wall.

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I love this as a whole but that last stanza is killer.. I love it..xo

[Muse]

Dream those dreams them them well

did you mean dream those dreams and dream them well?

Sorry, I just tripped a little there as I read you.

Give me a reason caught up in
your garden of earthly delights.
eat me whole,
like the devil on the wall.

I like this paragraph, it brings a few wicked images to mind.

[john]

Thanks for pointing that out... opps

[Muse]

sorry...I just try to be constructive. :)