Day and Night

Open your eyes and see beauty surrounding you.

She's like the sun

Warm and beautiful in the dark daylight

Lighting up everything in her path

Piercing through the light darkness

Even the moon is envious. 

Reviews

[J Schwenk]

You're welcome, thanks for reading it! I was going for a contradiction in this form of writing. The phrase ''Beautiful soul'' always comes up in the poetry, just not all the time. Thank you for your kind words!

[Abhishekizy]

Thanks for letting me review it. Its a good write, however since you chose to use words like "Light darkness" and "dark daylight", I was expecting a more insight on this "Beautiful Soul" you mentioned about. A good write though.