Honey

Sweetness.

Sweet like honey

Beautiful like a rose

Bright as the sun

Where can I find someone like you?

Eyes green as emerald

Hair soft as silk

Skin tan as olive

Sweet honey

Walking through nature

In the quiet stream

Where sunlight glistens

The air sweet as orchids

The evening rain is on its way

Sprinkling down the sky

She's here

Instead of there

In nature

Chose a place in the world to live 

And made it her reality

Living the dream

Loving adventure

Wherever she went

She tried something new everyday

Roaming through nature

Tasting the sun on her skin

Sweet as honey

Reviews

[Abhishekizy]

Sweet write! love the small sentences you make, un-complicating things and keeping it simple

[Tricia Pattinson]

Beauty is definitely in the eye of the beholder. I loved the way you've used textures and colors to build the image. The action of an adventurous soul gave movement. I liked it.

[J Schwenk]

I like how you said I used texture and color, thank you! I try to use different feelings and subjects in my writings but I guess it all boils down to the same meaning. Thanks for reading x

[MsJewel]

Beauty, love and nature go hand in hand. Your poem is soft and romantic filled with stunning images and a feeling of love and longing. Beautiful writing!

:) Julie

[J Schwenk]

Thank you so much, Julie! I guess this poem could evoke whatever feeling you want it to be. Thank you for reading xx

[Rene Salinas]

Ugh! sticky sweetly love stuff. Let me make a confession to you I detetst this subject. It is my shortcoming I get it but I am not one to pretend and then write to you "Lovely sentiment" " Well penned" if you want that go on there are plenty of them people around. This for me is superflous, empty , and stereotypical of an age which we don't live any longer. If you want proof here you go. Put bbc news channel and read this to any five minutes of news then record yourself and play it back. That would be the most hilarious five minutes ever the contradictions would be amazing!

In my world rather just tell her you won't harm her nor cheat and that you will try to be there for every single challenge that you will face them together.

Sorry this stuff not for me.

Thankyou

[KWP]

isn't that interesting ... I don't get into the whole 'love writing' either ... oh well :) xx

[Rene Salinas]

It's a good jobe we're all different otherwise it would be plain boring....

[J Schwenk]

Thank you both for sharing your opinions. However, this wasn't my intent to capture the "sticky sweet love stuff." I just wrote this out of fun and made it up. I saw the line "sweet as honey" and made a poem out of it. Thank you for reading anyway!

[KWP]

The fact that you sit and write for fun is all I need to hear ... Nice one xx